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I write, read and review, I blog frequently and love anything to do with books and writing, including editing. I am a Book Nerd and I wear that badge with pride. http://coffee2words.wordpress.com
An early piece by the author...
What appears to be some sort of slice-of-life drunk dad leaves family story, swiftly takes a turn for the paranormal.
Scott is a young boy and the protagonist. The climax is sudden and quite unexplained and really did nothing for me.
The writing needs work, too many descriptors that weren't needed, too much telling and not showing (e.g. I was panicking), and in general, simplistic narrative that just seemed bland.
Note: only 25% of the book is actually the story, the rest is promotion of the authors other work.
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