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Lynxie

Coffee2words

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Interesting idea

Blind Date - Tony Talbot

Blind date is a newer short story by Tony. It's very sensory, often painting the picture of the scene with the sense of smell or sound.

For such a short story it covers a wide range of themes. Dating can be daunting for anyone, but for a vision impaired young woman, it would take more courage than most.

To me, some of the writing, particularly early on, felt disjointed and choppy. Very unlike Tony's usual work.

I really like the idea, but this one doesn't feel as polished as Tony's normal work.