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Vampire's kiss is an extremely short story about vampirism, with a rather strange take on the 'fountain of youth' and/or 'elixir of immortality'.
I'd have liked a bit more teasing and sexiness. The characters have personality, evident through the witty/amusing dialogue, but lack substance in the physical sense.
Fairly well written, this one should see most readers smirking at some point.