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Like most of Tony's short stories, this one captures a single concept and gently prods it. This one could very easily be turned into a bigger story. Who were these people? How did the world end up as it is depicted in the story? Who was the girl?
It raises a lot of unanswered questions. Questions I'd like to see Tony try to answer in a longer piece. :)