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Typical Tony, he delivers a wicked little tale, but it's just a snippet.
The Grace Kelly look alike in this story is an interesting character. At first I thought she'd be a witch (with all that cackling!) but it turns out that was kinda wrong...
You don't get a great deal of information about the protagonist, but that's ok in this story because even though he's the protagonist, it's not really him that's important.
Again, I'd love to see this one drawn out into something longer, just so Tony could drag me kicking and screaming through that creepy night time station with Grace and her fetid mop bucket.