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This is how a short story should be done. The story felt whole, the characters real and the conclusion satisfactory yet still ambiguous enough to leave questions.
Tani, our protagonist, made logical choices and decisions, even while dealing with the paranormal phenomenon in the story. It was so nice to see that logical thought pattern.
That the piece also focused on a pocket watch and tied it in so nicely, was an added bonus.
I saw no errors in this piece. An enjoyable read with a great cast of characters.