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I have four words for you: This was too short!
The concept was brilliant and the writing well constructed, what was missing, however, was the rest of the story!
I long to know what happened, we're left on a fluffy warm emotional note, which I feel didn't do the short (but really should be longer) story justice. I felt a little like the guts of this story were still percolating inside Elle's head and unfortunately not on the ebook page I was reading. This left me feeling a little underwhelmed by the whole story.
I don't think you could make this into a 3 book trilogy or anything like that, but it needs a little more.
Well worth the 0.99c on Amazon for a quick and well constructed story.