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Coffee2words

I write, read and review, I blog frequently and love anything to do with books and writing, including editing. I am a Book Nerd and I wear that badge with pride.  http://coffee2words.wordpress.com

Currently reading

What Tomorrow May Bring
Deborah Rix, Shelbi Wescott, Joseph A. Turkot, David J. Normoyle, Cary Caffrey, Samantha Durante, Megan Thomason, Jenni Merritt, David Estes, Susan Kaye Quinn, Tony Bertauski

DNF @ 56%

Raven - Kimberly Brockman

Here's a preview of why:

 

A couple of typos and incorrect word choice in first 26%.
26% - mirror scene starts in the morning then turns into Sunday night within minutes.
27% - 'It didn't matter how many time (times)...'
29% - back (black) flecks
33% - ...no one could (be) behind...
I (It) had frightened...
35% - how does one bit the inside of their jaw?!
36% - tinkering laugh. I think you mean tinkling
39% - beside of (del of) him.
40% - four words on the note, only told the reader three
44%- offered and (an) apology...
46%- I pierced (pursed?) my lips together...'
47% - I inhaled a deep breathe (breath)...
Breathe instead of breath.
52% - wave's should be waves