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A very short tale set in Cornwall, The boy on the bridge didn't leave enough to the readers imagination. I would have left the ending a little more open...
The descriptions were rich, especially around clothing and environment. This allowed for a strong setting in a few sentences, some authors struggle with that in half a novel.
Certainly an interesting read for those who would like a super quick story about ghosts.